Tuesday, May 30, 2006

starsong

each time i wait
wait to hear this
this unearthly bliss
bliss created by mere mortals
mortals who give their all
all for this task
task of unending song
song of a new hope
hope for tomorrow
tomorrow brings the thought of you
you must listen for
for the undying light
light to illuminate
illuminate us standing here
here together
together at last

7 comments:

MKoutzun said...

I really love this poem. I love how you make each line run into the other with your use of repeatition. I was s saddened on the other hand that the final line did not go full circle and go to the beginning, unless that's a statement you want to make. But I'll be a jerk and read the first line "last time I wait", it makes me feel happy. Wonderful... just great!

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