Friday, June 23, 2006

fighting the feeling

lighthearted
superficial
all it is to you
all it was to me

silly
mocking games
imitated laughter

truly though
could there be more

beyond these whimsical words
and frothy phrases
i sense a streaming undercurrent
of what could be

it's what i felt last night
with you
beside
me

8 comments:

MKoutzun said...

Why do people have to fight the feeling? Why can't we just see things for what they are and just jump in. I like this poem. I like it a lot. Perhaps because of how there is always an undercurrent beneath everything. A glint in an eye, a tell of a twist in the wrist, anything can be turned into more and usually and most likely is. Yeah... thank you for this.

Fox said...

frothy phrases.
Nice.
It's perfect.

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