Wednesday, March 02, 2011

days (incomplete)

morning:
we were all squinting
stretching out
it may have been too much sun

dusk:
presiding like kings and queens
conquering the small clearing
scrounged twigs ablaze

smoke in my eyes
and deep
widening into my lungs

cliffs, precarious
looking out for miles
it's empty
embers fading
it feels like home

night:
climbing back down
thankful i had you next to me
paths in daytime, treacherous 
night, absurd
eyes down to the pool of light ahead

listening for the echoes
after today
so aware of you
i could follow only the sound of your footsteps
your hum

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I like how you place that painting (photo?) in the background.

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i love this visual poetry
i especially love the night section and the "scrounged twigs ablaze/ smoke in my eyes"

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